🧭 Overview
🧠 One-sentence thesis
These two sample complaints demonstrate how real litigation documents comply with federal pleading rules by providing detailed factual allegations, jurisdictional statements, and specific legal theories to support claims for relief.
📌 Key points (3–5)
- Purpose of the examples: introduce law students to actual litigation documents from real cases to prepare them for legal practice.
- What the complaints contain: detailed factual narratives, jurisdictional bases, legal theories, and specific relief requested—far exceeding minimum pleading requirements.
- How they comply with rules: both follow Rule 10(a) and (b) formatting requirements and satisfy both Notice Pleading and Plausibility Pleading standards.
- Common confusion: despite Rule 8(a) requiring only "short and plain statement," real complaints are often lengthy and detailed, which may surprise those who have only read the rule text.
- Key questions for analysis: understanding the basic facts and legal theories, recognizing why lawyers draft detailed complaints, and considering alternative drafting approaches.
📋 Structure of a federal complaint
📋 Required components
Both sample complaints follow a standard structure:
- Caption: Court name, parties, case number
- Jurisdiction and Venue: explains why the federal court has authority to hear the case
- Conditions Precedent: shows all required pre-filing steps have been completed
- Parties: identifies who is suing whom and relevant characteristics
- Facts: narrative of what happened
- Counts: separate legal claims with specific legal theories
- Prayer for Relief (WHEREFORE clause): lists specific remedies requested
🔢 Rule 10 compliance
The excerpt directs readers to "notice how the complaints comply with Rule 10(a) and (b)."
- Rule 10(a) requires a caption with court name, title, file number, and Rule 7(a) designation
- Rule 10(b) requires numbered paragraphs with separate counts stated separately
- Both sample complaints use numbered paragraphs and separate their legal theories into distinct counts
📝 Complaint 1: Employment discrimination case
📝 Basic facts and legal theories
Plaintiff: Brandon Cordero, Hispanic employee (Puerto Rican national origin), worked as fitness coordinator for City of Kissimmee
Core allegations:
- Facility manager Greg Smith announced "English only" policy at staff meetings (October and November 2005)
- Manager made statements like "We pay our employees in Dollars not pesos" and "I don't want to walk down the hallways and hear Spanish being spoken everywhere"
- Cordero opposed the policy and reported it as discriminatory
- After reporting, he experienced retaliation: performance questioned, emails ignored, reprimands, false evaluations
- Terminated April 11, 2006
Legal theories (two counts):
- Count I: Retaliation under Title VII for opposing discriminatory practices
- Count II: Race/National Origin Discrimination under Title VII
⚖️ Jurisdictional foundation
The complaint establishes federal court authority through:
| Element | How established |
|---|
| Federal question | Title VII of Civil Rights Act of 1964, 42 U.S.C. § 2000e |
| Statutory jurisdiction | 42 U.S.C. § 2000e-5(f), 28 U.S.C. §§ 1343(3) and (4) |
| Venue | Unlawful employment practice occurred in Middle District of Florida |
| Conditions precedent | EEOC Right to Sue letter issued September 24, 2008 (attached as Exhibit A) |
| Employer coverage | City employed more than 15 employees for required time period |
📅 Timeline detail
The complaint provides a detailed chronological narrative:
- October 18, 2005: First "English only" policy announcement
- November 1, 2005: Policy reiterated with discriminatory statements
- November 2, 2005: Cordero reported policy to City personnel
- December 6, 2005: Contacted assistant director (no response)
- January 13, 2006: Contacted EEOC
- January 23, 2006: Submitted grievance about harassment
- January 25 & February 9, 2006: Interviewed by City Attorney (3 hours each)
- April 11, 2006: Terminated
- May 7, 2006: Filed formal EEOC charge
- September 24, 2007: EEOC found reasonable cause (Exhibit B)
- September 25, 2008: Received right to sue letter
💰 Relief requested
Each count requests identical relief:
- Back pay and future income
- Lost fringe benefits
- Declaration that practices violate Title VII
- Injunction against violations
- Affirmative action to eliminate effects
- Reinstatement or front pay
- Compensatory damages for mental anguish, pain, suffering, humiliation
- Attorney's fees and costs under 42 U.S.C. § 2000e-5(k)
- Jury trial
- Other proper relief
📝 Complaint 2: Personal injury case
📝 Basic structure (partial excerpt)
Plaintiff: Susan Pitts, Alabama resident
Defendants:
- Robert G. Hemker (individual, Georgia resident)
- Comanche Construction, Inc. of Georgia (corporation)
Nature of case: Vehicle collision in Troup County, Georgia on November 30, 2005
⚖️ Diversity jurisdiction
Unlike Complaint 1 (federal question), this complaint invokes diversity jurisdiction:
| Requirement | How satisfied |
|---|
| Complete diversity | Plaintiff from Alabama; defendants from Georgia |
| Amount in controversy | Exceeds $75,000 (exclusive of interest and costs) |
| Statutory basis | 28 U.S.C. § 1332 |
| Venue | 28 U.S.C. § 1391(a)(2)—events occurred in Troup County, Georgia (Newnan Division) |
Note: The excerpt cuts off before the full factual narrative and legal claims.
🤔 Why complaints are lengthy and detailed
🤔 Exceeding minimum requirements
The excerpt poses a key question: "Why are these complaints so long and detailed? Don't they more than satisfy both Notice Pleading and Plausibility Pleading standards?"
Observations from the examples:
- Complaint 1 provides specific dates, direct quotes, detailed timeline, multiple meetings and communications
- Both complaints include extensive jurisdictional recitations beyond what Rule 8(a) requires
- Each count repeats and realleges all prior paragraphs
- Relief requested is itemized in detail
📏 Rule 8(a) vs. practice reality
Rule 8(a) requires only a "short and plain statement" of grounds for jurisdiction, claims, and relief.
The apparent paradox:
- The rule text suggests brevity
- Real complaints are often lengthy and detailed
- The excerpt asks: "Having read Rule 8(a) and the cases, are you surprised by the length and detail of these complaints?"
Possible reasons (implied by the excerpt's questions, not stated):
- Lawyers provide detail to ensure they satisfy plausibility standards
- Detail helps avoid dismissal motions
- Specificity preserves claims and prevents waiver
- Detailed facts support discovery requests
- Strategic advantage in framing the narrative
✏️ Drafting considerations
The excerpt asks: "Would you draft the complaints differently?"
This invites analysis of:
- Whether any allegations are unnecessary
- Whether the level of detail helps or hurts the plaintiff
- Whether the structure could be more effective
- How to balance completeness with conciseness
🎯 Study questions and learning goals
🎯 Understanding the cases
The excerpt directs students to:
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Identify the crux: "What is the crux of each lawsuit? Make sure you understand what the basic facts and legal theories are."
- Complaint 1: Employment discrimination and retaliation based on opposing "English only" policy
- Complaint 2: Vehicle collision (details incomplete in excerpt)
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Recognize rule compliance: "Notice how the complaints comply with Rule 10(a) and (b)."
- Proper captions, numbered paragraphs, separate counts
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Analyze length and detail: Consider why real complaints exceed minimum requirements and whether this surprises readers familiar with Rule 8(a)
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Consider alternatives: Think critically about drafting choices
📚 Context from preceding discussion
The excerpt begins with a court order from a different case discussing:
- Twombly and Iqbal changing pleading standards
- "Relatively unchartered ground" with "bumps and detours"
- A Rule 12(i) preliminary hearing to address pleading issues
- Balancing interests between restrictive and permissive pleading rules
Connection: The sample complaints illustrate how practitioners respond to evolving pleading standards by providing detailed factual allegations that clearly satisfy plausibility requirements.